I just read a Harvey Pekar comic that began with a splash page monologue. It loos like a perfect format for my story which is leaving people confused, missing the point, and just plain out of the loop. So if I add asplash page with the title and a big explanation, people will know what to look for in the following pages. The only question now is whether or not I'll stick with making the last page. It might not be necessary. But more text in general....

More explanation. I'm telling a story. I don't know how much of it can simply be shown. It wasn't coming accross correctly.